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Personal Account of Barack Obama’s Inauguration Day

My brother went to the Presidential Inauguration last Tuesday. This is his write-up.

I just wanted to write up something about the inauguration yesterday while the thoughts are still fresh in my mind. There are no words to describe what the feeling was like down there. I was in the masses right in the middle between the Capital building and the Washington monument. The part that amazes me the most was the look that people had because everyone had his/her own personal story and connection to the moment and why they came down there.

Now the story about how to get down there is a story in itself and I will get to that later. Everyone will think it is crazy but for this day, everything was worth it and that was part of the bond everyone had because everyone down there had gone through the same thing just to get there.

I think everyone knows I have been a big Obama supporter form the beginning and been following this campaign throughout. For me to be there at the inauguration was just a sense of pride to feel like I have been a small part of the process and of course hope that things will change in this country. There were many African Americans of all ages. I would estimate the number at over a third to half the crowd. You could see what the moment meant to them but you also met and talked with people from all over the country when you were on the train, at Starbucks, walking to the event, and while you were there.

Now I just wanted to give you a feel of what the logistics were like because it was crazy. Definitely a once in a lifetime experience and you really needed to have that level of commitment to get there. My day started out leaving my apartment at 3:00. I was meeting up with some friends at the plan was to get on the first train out at 4:00 AM. Needless to say the start of the lines was right there getting into the train station.

By time everyone got together we made it into DC at 5:30 and walked to the mall. By the time we settled into our position at 6AM, the middle of the mall is as far as we got. So it was there that I stayed till the event started at 11:30 AM. After 7AM you did not want to move and go anywhere because you would have never been able to make it back.

It was cold but you had to know that going in. I really didn’t feel it till after the event and here was when things got really crazy. DC was in total lock down. They had closed streets and access points to begin with and with the amount of people there in the mall they decided to close off access to the parade route.

If you are not familiar with DC, closing off the parade route meant people could not cross back into the city from the mall and with a million plus people there nobody really knew where to go. After tracing back and forth in the crown we finally found some security people that told us the only way to go the direction we needed was the end of the mall. Keep in mind the mall is about two miles in length. So we basically hung out around the Washington monument waiting for the crowd to thin out.

That is where the cold really hit. But we finally made it out and had to walk another mile after getting out of the mall to access a train station that was not flooded with people. You might have seen the stands had no people for the parade. Well what happened was most people could not get there and it was too long to out in the cold to make it through even if you wanted to. I made it back to the apartment at 4 PM with many memories.

Book: Persuading on Paper by Marcia Yudkin

The complete title of this book is Persuading on Paper: The Complete Guide to Writing Copy that Pulls in Business. It’s rare when a book actually lives up to its title. This book does and is a very well done overview to writing effective business copy.

If you’re getting a book like this, I’m going to assume that you think you can write to a certain extent. If you are looking for Writing 101 help, this is not for you.

This book gives the whys and whats of flyers, sales, letters, ads, etc. The author tells about each piece’s purpose and how readers tend to interact with it.

But beyond the technical aspects of creating copy for these formats, this book also provides coaching on how to figure out your audience and on how to find an appropriate voice in your communications.

A point from the book that I really need to keep in mind is that describing a service or product is not as compelling as explaining how it will solve a customer’s specific problems. That’s a good tip for me because I don’t think I would have believed in the principle had I not read her examples.

I think the advice and guidelines from Marcia Yudkin are solid and authentic. I believe the points inside will help me successfully revise my existing materials.

Even if I decide to work with a copywriter to complete my projects, I’ll have a better sense of what to ask for and what to look for.

It doesn’t have much to say about writing for electronic media, but then again, electronic copy is not “on paper.” This is a book that delivers on its title.

BSG: This Is Not a Show for the Addle-Minded

Happy Chinese New Year, everyone! It’s the Year of the Ox in case you were wondering.

spoilers for “A Disquiet Follows My Soul” (4.12)

I caught some weird bug that laid me out all weekend so I don’t feel as if I was fully emotionally or intellectually connected with this episode. I’m sure it will play differently for me in future viewings.

For today, all I have are some quick hits:

  • I think the webisodes fall in between “Sometimes a Great Notion” and “A Disquiet Follows My Soul.” That placement makes a significant difference for the Hoshi character.
  • The prophetic characters (Roslin, D’Anna, Starbuck, Leoben, Baltar) are feeling the weight of their failures. It seems that Six has been spared so far because her future is growing within her. She’s still able to see the beyond. My question is, why do the rest of them all seem to think that their prophetic leadership ended with Earth? Those interpretations seem to be of their own dreams and wishes. Was that really the gods’/god’s/universe’s message?
  • Athena, Helo, and Hera supplied the only happy moment in the pervious episode. Perhaps everyone really should get down to the business of making babies.
  • The installation of Cylon-technology may be beneficial, but it is not politically possible at this time. It’s also not immediately urgent. It may become so once they face a Cavil scouting force or become in danger of being stranded, but until that time, you just can’t sell this. This is not a smart stand on the part of the Adamas. Everyone’s judgments are clouded at this time, but this just doesn’t seem to be a good fight to pick. I wonder why they think it is.
  • Oh, Cally. Even after you’re gone, they still can’t give you just a little bit of importance in the grand scheme of it all.
  • Dear Tigh, if you develop that chart for Tyrol, could I please also have a copy?